Wednesday, November 12, 2008

meri pahli shayri


एक उम्र बिता दी इंतजार में यूँ ही , की वो आयेंगे वादा निभाने को 

न वो आये न खबर कोई, तब कूच किया महखाने को |

11 comments:

  1. it taking me toward my old memories

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  2. aisi shaayari na kabhi likhi gyi h or na kabhi likhi jayegi. its one n only typically lokesh's special.

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  3. umda shayri aur shayrana andaj ke liye 3 cheejo akeedmand hoti hain.
    1.bhav
    2.bhasa
    aur
    3.bhavnaeen

    janab lokesh in teeno cheejo main mahir hai..
    "gauhar"

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  4. keep it up shaayer ke sabhi laxan hai

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  5. kuch romentic shayri bhi likho ........yaar.........abhi din hai baharo ke ji bhar ke ji lo yaaro kya pata kal jeevan ki dor kaha ho.............

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  6. janb shayar hai to sahi
    "hum to unhe soche,
    vo bhi shame soche,
    bat akidat ki rahi,
    idhar hum intezar kare,
    udhar vo!!!

    gd shayari

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  7. abe mehkhane jaane ki koi jarurat nai hai bhai is samasya k liye aapko munna bhai MBBS ka vo gana sun lena chahiye:::
    ek din apne muhalle me hema aayiii....
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    or phir agle din aishwarya
    ok
    to samasya ke hal pe goor farmaiye sarkar or mehkhane na jaaiye sarkar...
    abe comment likhte likhte to me khud hi shayar ban gaya yaar

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  8. good par kuch hum farmaye aseki
    jarurat nahi yaro mehkane jane ki kyonki galib ne arj kiya ha
    peg pe peg pine se kya fyada
    rat gujri to utar jayegi
    kisi ki ankho se piyo yaro
    kasam se sari umar nase me gujar jayegi
    divya

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  9. MRUNMAYA SAID...
    BOSSS ARJ TO BAHUT LOG KARTE HE .. LEKIN KISI K SAMAJH ME AA JATI HE AUR KOI BEWKUF BAN JATA HE ... NEWAYS ... NICE LINES...

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  10. yaar ye hi to problem hai,,, hum jab arz karte hai to sabke samaj me to aata hi nahi hai,,,, hahahhahhahh

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